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by MetroidBob
Posted 15 years ago
Just a relatively short story I managed to finish in a few days, with the help of a couple all-nighters. Mostly because really, I just wanted to write yaoi and weight gain.

It's about twenty-one pages, and saved in .rtf (Rich Text Format) to actually preserve some important formatting, so you'll have to click the button this time, sorry. IF anyone has an issue with not being able to open it, let me know, and I'll work something out for you.
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Category Theme Species File Size Story Fat Furs Vulpine (Other) 113.6 kB
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bruce arctic fox ray hare weight gain yaoi drinking misanthropy paranoia sunlight male u_metroidbob c_story t_fat_furs s_vulpine_other
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
OOOOH 20 pages. That's impressive considering it took you only a few days. I am impressed again. congrats.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Hah, thanks, lol. I'm just glad I could keep my attention span reigned in long enough to do it all concurrently.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
What i dont get though is why you said it's a "short" story. 20 pages isn't that short, lawd. Like, I couldn't keep focused long enough to type that much.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
For me it is, lol. When I think my next-shortest fetishy story is 38 pages? That'd be "A Change For the Fatter", if I recall correctly.

I don't exactly try to make everything so long, but once I get going, there's just so many things I find I want to say. ;o;
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Well yeah, your stories tend to be long so that makes sense. Still, that's a good thing.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Yeah, I like my stories like I like my cats: looooooooooong. :D
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Haha I don't get it. :) anyways, I like how bunny curses with the word science. Nice touch
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Just Google "Longcat" sometime, haha. It's completely safe for work, and indeed, adorable.

Yes, I garnered the idea from a non-religious friend of mine who does the same, partially for comic effect. Myself, I just say "gods" in the plural to cover my ass, in case they're watching me.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
I don't go to work. I'm to young. And my school is strict with the blocking of stuff so maybe later while I'm home.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Probably a good idea, then. Come to think of it, you may wish to refer to http://knowyourmeme.com/ for information on Longcat. It's a good site.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Longcat this weird little white cat? That happens when u scroll down?
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
That's the one, lol.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Ah yes that! I've seen it. Odd little creature that is.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
That's the Internet for you.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Meh, I'm not religious either. I'm agnostic. I say gawd.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Also a good substitute.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Indeed it is. :) anyways I apologize for the forgetting to click reply. I'm really bad with that. Anyways, I finished a minute or two ago and it was very good. I don't get why ray said he wa gonna sacrifice him though.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
I often forget to click it, as well, lol, no worries.

I'm glad you liked it. And that was kind of a joke I never expanded on, I guess, about how he's always expecting to wake up one day to an apocalypse. Preferably with zombies. And if/when it came down to it, he'd be only too happy to make the sacrifice.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Hahaha wooow. How very nice of him.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Well, somebody has to survive to repopulate the planet afterward. They don't both need to bite it (or get bitten, as it may be).
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Luckily its a rabbit repopulating. They multiply like mad.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Oh yes, zombie/bunny wars! And then, Bunny Planet!
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Haha that sounds cute!
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
It would probably look pretty fuzzy from space, too.
akq96
Akq96 ~akq96
Watcher 15 years ago
Lawd that might be uncomfortable
montu
montu ~montu
Anthro Artist 15 years ago
Loved it!!
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Good to hear, thanks!
rofox
ro_fox ~rofox
Anthro Artist 15 years ago
This is an excellent story. I didn't expect to be as long as I was, but you intrigued me then pulled me all the way in. I was a bit confused by what exactly was going on with the hare, but towards the end it made more sense. I it, the fox blithely growing fatter was f-fun, but the story was also a STORY, with the weight gain not just for fun but integral to that story as well. You did a great job here. ^^
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
15 years ago
Thank you, I'm quite glad you liked it so much!

Looking back, I suppose I could've added more whispers of paranoia into Ray's ears, to clear it up a bit.

And I do love having some plot skeletal system to the other fun stuff that goes on in the body of the story itself. Really helps a story's longevity, for one thing, and gives you more opportunities for fun.
durandthefox
durandthefox ~durandthefox
Writer 14 years ago
I don't know why this doesn't have more attention, because it's awesome! I think I can actually learn from this.
metroidbob
MetroidBob ~metroidbob
OP
14 years ago
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I am curious, though, as to what you gleaned from this? I didn't think I was known for being terribly informative. Or generally having good ideas.
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