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Commentary:
After seeing Yuari and Gervas at the docks, I was wondering if any readers out there would be expecting an appearance from Ivo. He's only been on one page so far this volume and that was of him explicitly stating that he didn't want to be involved in the events of that chapter.
Jamon's reaction to him was interesting to write for. After some thinking, I figured Jamon would likely only know of Ivo and hadn't met him yet. He just so happened to just miss seeing Ivo in chapters 19 and 20.
Planning 3 was tricky. At first I tried to do a wide view of everyone there. But that wasn't working out due to being too complicated and most of them needing to be covered up by the orange zoomy effect. There wasn't a need to show absolutely everyone on the scene when it's already established who's present anyway. This new 3 set up now has appropriate negative space to convey what I needed.
Relevant Pages:
17-18, 19-17, 21-9
PATREON | COMM INFO | RedBubble | KO-FIFugaia Adventure - Telegram Group
(Ask for the discord server if you like the story)
Commentary:
After seeing Yuari and Gervas at the docks, I was wondering if any readers out there would be expecting an appearance from Ivo. He's only been on one page so far this volume and that was of him explicitly stating that he didn't want to be involved in the events of that chapter.
Jamon's reaction to him was interesting to write for. After some thinking, I figured Jamon would likely only know of Ivo and hadn't met him yet. He just so happened to just miss seeing Ivo in chapters 19 and 20.
Planning 3 was tricky. At first I tried to do a wide view of everyone there. But that wasn't working out due to being too complicated and most of them needing to be covered up by the orange zoomy effect. There wasn't a need to show absolutely everyone on the scene when it's already established who's present anyway. This new 3 set up now has appropriate negative space to convey what I needed.
Relevant Pages:
17-18, 19-17, 21-9
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