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Some time ago, a hypergate disaster caused parts of the moon to shatter. As a result, much of the world's inhabitance decided to leave and colonize a neighboring planet. But a few remained, mostly Sunes in general and Luarii in specific, to scavenge the remains of their former civilization.
Nagato, the five-tailed Sune, is one of those remainders. When he found a battleship-aircraft carrier hybrid, he again encountered his hated rival, Kaga. Both Luarii, stubborn and with opposite tastes, with Naga calmer with a ion for guns and cannons and Kaga wilder with a ion for drones and mechs, they and their crew locked into combat. And nothing will stand in their way of achieving their goals.
This story took a while to get done. Not because I'm not used to writing a science fiction story or that it's that complex (the rough draft was finished in February), but because Donnie took a while to read through it while adding his embellishments. The whole editing part is why I was lenient on it. Though that does remind me, he still needs to get through another story I wrote that involves his spacesunes.
In any case, enjoy!
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KirunoSome time ago, a hypergate disaster caused parts of the moon to shatter. As a result, much of the world's inhabitance decided to leave and colonize a neighboring planet. But a few remained, mostly Sunes in general and Luarii in specific, to scavenge the remains of their former civilization.
Nagato, the five-tailed Sune, is one of those remainders. When he found a battleship-aircraft carrier hybrid, he again encountered his hated rival, Kaga. Both Luarii, stubborn and with opposite tastes, with Naga calmer with a ion for guns and cannons and Kaga wilder with a ion for drones and mechs, they and their crew locked into combat. And nothing will stand in their way of achieving their goals.
This story took a while to get done. Not because I'm not used to writing a science fiction story or that it's that complex (the rough draft was finished in February), but because Donnie took a while to read through it while adding his embellishments. The whole editing part is why I was lenient on it. Though that does remind me, he still needs to get through another story I wrote that involves his spacesunes.
In any case, enjoy!
If you enjoy my writings, please consider donating. ^.|.^ http://ko-fi.com/foxgamer01
Also, if you want to be a er on Patreon, here is the link. https://www.patreon.com/foxgamer01
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